clinic

everything works smooth now but there is still quite small thing tho. first, the title "clinic" didn't really fit on the composition. what do you see in a clinic? what does that clinic has and the purpose of it individually. what im trying to say is despite of high-advance equipments even if its non-existing yet atleast make it mundane. at fisrt glance i thought its a garage 'till i notice the title. now don't let your title speaks for whats on the canvas. it should be the otherway arround. if you can make the canvas speak for it self without putting a title then no doublt you have a good strong piece right there and try to make the foreground less obvious that vignette effect is enough to support that, i know its a compositional thing to have but you wanted to show a design; a concept directly ... hope this make sense and also. can i add you on fb? xD